HEALING
Don’t loose your hopes so soon,
the best is yet to come.
Try to heal your scars,
with a sword of merrysome.
Your wounds are not physical,
but soul’s dead.
It needs to be sealed from first to the last stretch.
Don’t let others to scratch your wounds open,
Have some faith to beat your own thoughts of burden.
Time is a luxury pursuit,
Which your healing will eventually suit.
Remember,
Your tears won’t be a medicine,
but hopes could.
Abused by others,
but can be a self medication for good.
Remind yourself of the promised sunshine,
Tear those clouds of social manipulation and chimes.
Let your thoughts and hopes to breathe through,
Settling over the cement of a concrete grue.
Shahnaz Parvin
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118 Comments
Pari · August 9, 2020 at 20:46
Osm lines ❤️❤️…..luv it❤️❤️
Shumaiza · August 9, 2020 at 20:42
Words have the power to make you, break you and shake you. Your words are so motivational and are beautifully used in this poem❤ Worth reading✔
Binod · August 10, 2020 at 19:42
Same here but different person🌝
Sneha · August 9, 2020 at 20:32
You should be proud of yourself.
It’s amazing ❤
Jini · August 10, 2020 at 22:31
Touched ❤️ Well done Lav ! keep it up
Divyanshi · August 9, 2020 at 20:23
Wow 😍😍 it’s just fantastic 😍😍😍
Ambuj · August 9, 2020 at 20:22
Beautifully written.. Good combo of words and emotions
The ungraduate poet · August 9, 2020 at 20:21
The lines of the poem feels like life given to words❤️❤️❤️😇
Sam · August 9, 2020 at 08:54
Let your hopes, not your hurts, shape your future ❣️
Vartika Ratawal · August 9, 2020 at 00:52
Penned very well 😍❣️❣️❣️keep up the good work.
Arshiya · August 10, 2020 at 14:25
The lines touched my heart. My heart felt. I love it. Keep writing 💞💞
Prapti · August 10, 2020 at 22:28
Nice lines
Aishu · August 10, 2020 at 23:51
Very awesome writing….. Keep it up…. Love to read….
Rehan · August 11, 2020 at 23:54
It’s amazing to read this. It is so beautiful.
Poetic incandescence · August 9, 2020 at 00:49
A beautifully presented poem, carries the essence of a self Healing process from inside as well as outside. Awesome ❣️❣️❣️😍
Saddo.mania · August 9, 2020 at 20:31
Woah this really touched my heart, so deep!!! Keep it up the work dude💜💜
Vibhuti · August 9, 2020 at 21:35
Poem is awesome about healing, I felt the lines ,this touched my heart 🥰🥰❣️❣️keep writing lines are amazing ❤️ keep it up bro
Tulu · August 10, 2020 at 22:27
Amazing👌
Parvathi · August 11, 2020 at 00:41
Amazing writing skills ☘️
Ila Saikia · August 10, 2020 at 21:10
Well jotted down. 😍👍
Rahul · August 10, 2020 at 22:37
Beautiful it is! ❤
Umar · August 11, 2020 at 23:53
Awesome write-up!
Poetic soul · August 8, 2020 at 23:58
Heart felt ❣️
Tasneem Saba · August 10, 2020 at 16:05
This is motivational…felt motivated after reading this…Your content is amazing
Autumn · August 10, 2020 at 16:54
Needed this!
Beautifully crafted girl. ❤
TARPITA SAIKIA · August 10, 2020 at 21:09
Beautiful! 💕
Ishita · August 10, 2020 at 21:12
Very beautifully written. Keep up the good work!
Kizie · August 11, 2020 at 23:51
Hey! Every word is so beautifully plotted. Well done.
Vikram Singh · August 11, 2020 at 12:49
Nice one♥️
Rachel · August 11, 2020 at 23:52
Loved it.