I'm Sorry

I understand your hate ,
May be I’m not your mate ,
We met cause of fate ,
That evening I asked you to date ,
You agreed , so let’s not debate ,
Romeo Juliet we tried to imitate ,
In accepting this , let’s not hesitate ,
All those evenings , completely intimate ,
I still feel the vibes we resonate ,
Those red roses and music still vibrate ,
And my share of chocolates you ate ,
Thanks for everything I know I irritate ,
For both of us , let’s separate ,
I appreciate your wait ,
You can leave …
Before it’s too late 💔

Pawan Dhaliwal

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34 Comments

Priya anand · August 28, 2020 at 01:43

wow❤❤

Gursimaran Kaur · August 27, 2020 at 23:05

This is so good. Great job 🙂

Bipan · August 27, 2020 at 22:46

Beautifully written, expressing the true emotions. 😇

Pondering pretzel · August 27, 2020 at 22:43

I guess m gonna memorize this…whatta blessing☀️ It’s a freakin’ song to your heart❤

Parminder Kaur · August 27, 2020 at 22:17

amazing 👍👍😍😍😍

Psidhu · August 27, 2020 at 22:16

Wonderful
Deep and emotional❣

Nishtha Sharma · August 27, 2020 at 22:15

Expressed beautifully 💖💯you go girl 🥰

Muskaan · August 27, 2020 at 22:13

Wonderful 💓👍

Pallavi · August 27, 2020 at 22:09

Well written

Muskan · August 27, 2020 at 21:30

Amazing . Feelings are depicted beautifully ❤❤

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