I understand your hate ,
May be I’m not your mate ,
We met cause of fate ,
That evening I asked you to date ,
You agreed , so let’s not debate ,
Romeo Juliet we tried to imitate ,
In accepting this , let’s not hesitate ,
All those evenings , completely intimate ,
I still feel the vibes we resonate ,
Those red roses and music still vibrate ,
And my share of chocolates you ate ,
Thanks for everything I know I irritate ,
For both of us , let’s separate ,
I appreciate your wait ,
You can leave …
Before it’s too late 💔
Pawan Dhaliwal
Follow her at @thelostgirlwhowrites
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34 Comments
Priya anand · August 28, 2020 at 01:43
wow❤❤
Gursimaran Kaur · August 27, 2020 at 23:05
This is so good. Great job 🙂
Bipan · August 27, 2020 at 22:46
Beautifully written, expressing the true emotions. 😇
Pondering pretzel · August 27, 2020 at 22:43
I guess m gonna memorize this…whatta blessing☀️ It’s a freakin’ song to your heart❤
Parminder Kaur · August 27, 2020 at 22:17
amazing 👍👍😍😍😍
Psidhu · August 27, 2020 at 22:16
Wonderful
Deep and emotional❣
Nishtha Sharma · August 27, 2020 at 22:15
Expressed beautifully 💖💯you go girl 🥰
Muskaan · August 27, 2020 at 22:13
Wonderful 💓👍
Pallavi · August 27, 2020 at 22:09
Well written
Muskan · August 27, 2020 at 21:30
Amazing . Feelings are depicted beautifully ❤❤